From 22f14cd5e72739360baa1376c18cf44474dfb002 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Marcus Hill <bcf8c9f2@opayq.com>
Date: Sun, 8 Oct 2023 21:30:15 +0100
Subject: [PATCH] Telemetry - Fix typo & add polite note regarding importance
 of telemetry data

---
 settings_telemetry.php | 7 ++++---
 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diff --git a/settings_telemetry.php b/settings_telemetry.php
index 8a7c29bc..53fcbd30 100644
--- a/settings_telemetry.php
+++ b/settings_telemetry.php
@@ -12,7 +12,8 @@ require_once("inc_all_settings.php"); ?>
             <form action="post.php" method="post" autocomplete="off">
 
                 <div class="form-group">
-                    <label>Telemery</label>
+                    <label>Telemetry</label>
+                    <p><i>If you can't measure it, you can't improve it. Please consider turning on telemetry data to provide valuable insights on how you're using ITFlow - so we can improve it for everyone. </i></p>
                     <div class="input-group">
                         <div class="input-group-prepend">
                             <span class="input-group-text"><i class="fa fa-fw fa-broadcast-tower"></i></span>
@@ -23,12 +24,12 @@ require_once("inc_all_settings.php"); ?>
                             <option <?php if ($config_telemetry == "2") { echo "selected"; } ?> value = "2">Detailed</option>
                         </select>
                     </div>
-                    <small class="form-text"><a href="https://docs.itflow.org/telemetry" target="_blank">Click Here for additional details regarding the information we gather <i class="fas fa-external-link-alt"></i></a></small>
+                    <small class="form-text">We respect your privacy. <a href="https://docs.itflow.org/telemetry" target="_blank">Click here <i class="fas fa-external-link-alt"></i></a> for additional details regarding the information we gather. </small>
                 </div>
 
                 <div class="form-group">
                     <label>Comments</label>
-                    <textarea class="form-control" rows="4" name="comments" placeholder="Any Comments to send before hitting Send Telemetry Data?"></textarea>
+                    <textarea class="form-control" rows="4" name="comments" placeholder="Any one-off comments to send before hitting Send Telemetry Data?"></textarea>
                 </div>
 
                 <hr>